Saturday, March 3, 2012

March Haiku

Cinnamon coloured,
Tepid, post-spring, twilight sky,
Turns a spiral; falls.
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3 comments:

  1. MountainebonyMarch 7, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    The last line works like it should in a haiku. Loved it.

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  2. NeerMarch 7, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    The meters all wrong! Now, that asked for-forcibly-done criticism is done!

    I love it!! Cinnamon colored!!

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  3. NeerMarch 7, 2012 at 11:16 PM

    The meters all wrong! Now, that asked for-forcibly-done criticism is done!

    I love it!! Cinnamon colored!!

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